So I was feeling particularly bad about some of my work this week (there will be particulars in a future post), and decided to go back and review the Ira Glass videos (parts 1, 2, 3, and 4) on storytelling. I came away with several things, some of which even managed to help me feel better.
Part 1: When Ira Glass talks about story movement and a continuing progression of questions, he’s using different language to describe something Robert McKee covers. McKee talks about the “gaps”, those places in a story where you have a gap between what a character expected and what they got, or between what the audience thought was going to happen and what actually happened. These “gaps” are where the movement takes place, and the structure for the gap is often expressed in a question. If we know precisely what’s going to happen next as we move from one fact to another, we’re really just sliding among static positions. It’s the unexpected, the “I didn’t see that coming!” that helps turn a set piece into a story.
Glass also talks about being ruthless, something else that every good writer and editors I’ve ever worked with knew well. If a bit of dialogue, a fact, a piece of exposition about a character doesn’t move the story forward (or help create a story in the first place), then get rid of it–at best it will slow down the story, at worst, it will bring it to a crashing stop.
Part 2: “Give yourself permission to fail” is some of the best advice I’ve ever received. If everything I do meets my standards, then my standards aren’t nearly high enough. It’s critical, though, to understand why something is a failure, to recognize it as a failure, and to move on to the next story with lesson in hand–to move on and try to succeed. This is one of those situations in which a good editor or second set of eyes can be important: someone who hasn’t spent 38 hours collecting material can be much freer with a proper diagnosis of “crap” than the person who’s trying to figure out how to justify having spent all that time…
Part 3: OK, an admission: I don’t particularly enjoy writing books, and I’ve never tried to write a novel. I know quite a few successful novelists, though, and almost all have shared the same advice on getting a first novel published: start by writing a novel and sticking it in desk drawer. Then, write the novel that you’ll try to get published. Their point is that you have to write enough words to develop your craft before you have a reasonable chance of success. Glass uses the same approach here–if you have the basic “good taste” to get started, then a significant part of success is developing the craft through repetition. Don’t give up. That’s a piece of great advice.
Part 4: Characters and stories. I think the thing I really take away from this is that even in the “moment of reflection” that tells the audience why they should care, the characters should be the ones showing the audience why they should care. If I have to come up with a voice-over to tell the audience why this matters, then I either haven’t found the right character or I haven’t let them tell the right story.
I know what I want my stories to do, I just don’t always succeed in allowing the stories to do their work. Especially when I’m using new tools to tell the story, I don’t yet have the “chops” to let the craft get out of the way. Fortunately, I have time and more stories to work on getting it right.